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It is very charming. The lip-syncing is very slick. Some of the shots are very striking especially the sun and field scenes. However, is the song not about how the protagonist cannot get the person she admires, so how come she is smiling? The dog is quite random as well. On the other hand the dog adds a normality to the music video, this sets it apart from other music videos, which means it can become more relatable for the audience. You have also flattered Imogen very well with the dull colours and bleaching which follows one of the conventions of music videos.

Lily Vetch

I thought over all you have a brilliant video.

The editing is smooth and to the beat throughout.

You have used a number of different techniques which work well together, stop motion, slow motion and the computer thing which is my best bit :)

You do not have too many different effects which is bonus. And nice twist at the end with Matt..

the way you return to the lip sync holds the whole thing together, and they are on time.

I do not have any criticisms, i really like it x

Maud Start

I really like the way you've put a male in the video to relate 'Imogen's' feelings for him. I also like that the whole thing is in the same colour wash black and whitish.
I don’t like that the boy only appears right at the beginning and right at the end, would have been better if he appeared at other stages too. BUT LOVE IT!

Teresa Alba Vazquez